tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post5978212380571702978..comments2023-05-25T06:48:58.804-04:00Comments on Anaïs: me and the SushiAnahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-64558881750643194542008-11-12T00:55:00.000-05:002008-11-12T00:55:00.000-05:00Julie,It is nice to meet you too (and to read you...Julie,<BR/>It is nice to meet you too (and to read your poems).<BR/>I agree : a good end might make an otherwise rather mediocre poem become remarkable.<BR/>As for the hypertext and links , I think they add some spice to the posting directly on an web log.Anahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-57702343185590302342008-11-11T14:51:00.000-05:002008-11-11T14:51:00.000-05:00Hi! I saw you at the link on S.L.'s site. This i...Hi! I saw you at the link on S.L.'s site. This is wonderful. I love the hyperlinks. I've seen it done a bit, but this is the best example I've seen yet. And your last three lines are awesome!!! The whole poem is excellent, but I really get excited when I see a powerful ending. It's nice to meet you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-48187503166991486742008-11-11T10:49:00.000-05:002008-11-11T10:49:00.000-05:00Thank you Barbara.I think the idea was that someti...Thank you Barbara.<BR/>I think the idea was that sometimes the traditional cuisine or art of a foreign culture becomes a kind of fad, something cool to eat (or write or read or watch). But it loses its intrinsic value, it becomes empty form...Anahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-76356368260637320992008-11-10T21:59:00.000-05:002008-11-10T21:59:00.000-05:00I love the "fad amateurs" -- you captured them wel...I love the "fad amateurs" -- you captured them well here -- nice<BR/><BR/>barbaraAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-30136133917088815362008-11-05T16:24:00.000-05:002008-11-05T16:24:00.000-05:00thanks s.l. I guess it does bring an extra savor t...thanks s.l. <BR/>I guess it does bring an extra savor to the sushi...Anahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-78149549517296287662008-11-04T02:53:00.000-05:002008-11-04T02:53:00.000-05:00This blew me away, how the poem has progressed fro...This blew me away, how the poem has progressed from beginning (bar, narrow line) to end (nation, tip of the tongue). It makes the subject cuisine so much more mouth-watering. ;) Cheers.S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-86541988764452362222008-10-28T11:52:00.000-04:002008-10-28T11:52:00.000-04:00thank you for your comments,I thought I give it a ...thank you for your comments,<BR/>I thought I give it a try (hypertext poetry) -though most of my work is still in the sweet classic style. I am so glad you liked itAnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-19871104903589677962008-10-28T00:58:00.000-04:002008-10-28T00:58:00.000-04:00thanks for including the links--it really adds ano...thanks for including the links--it really adds another dimension which works so intrinsically well but rarely taken advantage ofAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-44997881089050310432008-10-27T23:06:00.000-04:002008-10-27T23:06:00.000-04:00That is a supercool piece of hypertextual art poet...That is a supercool piece of hypertextual art poetry of the highest order. The idea behind it is complete and acts as a motive impulse behind the whole piece. It has thematic integrity, an orginal thought and unique expression. Brilliant!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com