tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post6178227262234841035..comments2023-05-25T06:48:58.804-04:00Comments on Anaïs: Readwritepoem #94Anahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-33108491925164192092009-10-02T13:02:15.982-04:002009-10-02T13:02:15.982-04:00@gautami:thanks@gautami:thanksAnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-65914945038887134802009-10-02T09:42:46.698-04:002009-10-02T09:42:46.698-04:00So much rhythm in there!
let the red bleedSo much rhythm in there!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/10/let-red-bleed.html" rel="nofollow">let the red bleed</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-58035636397085412822009-10-02T00:47:09.910-04:002009-10-02T00:47:09.910-04:00@Linda,
thank you, I do appreciate the interpretat...@Linda,<br />thank you, I do appreciate the interpretation. Yes genuine faith is not a matter of science...<br />@Donna<br />I agree, the first two are a keeper<br />@Deb<br />I guess the idea of muddiness from Murdoch stayed with me. Yes he was an angel with only one sin, one flaw-pride, for the rest he was better than all other angels<br />@Tumblewords<br />yes, I am afraid there are not clear cut linesAnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-21912327041138770582009-10-02T00:36:38.962-04:002009-10-02T00:36:38.962-04:00Intriguing. The many shades of sin and redemption....Intriguing. The many shades of sin and redemption. Nice!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-90041237254379147262009-10-01T23:45:20.959-04:002009-10-01T23:45:20.959-04:00This is so powerful. I love the ideas expressed, a...This is so powerful. I love the ideas expressed, and how. A reminder that the Christian Devil was once an angel, and how muddy the lines really are. Fabulous. It calls culture on the carpet.Debhttp://stoneymoss.orgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-41061767115072704902009-10-01T21:55:50.459-04:002009-10-01T21:55:50.459-04:00paint him dark(red)
like a rust stained angel of s...paint him dark(red)<br />like a rust stained angel of some sort…<br /><br />when the devil was merely tinged<br />by a standard deviation (or two)<br />from redemption.<br /><br />These opening lines are wonderful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-43576397441669351532009-10-01T20:35:48.001-04:002009-10-01T20:35:48.001-04:00The hues of your poem weave an interesting tale. I...The hues of your poem weave an interesting tale. I enjoyed the scientific measurements of "faith". The blending of these ideas creates a uniquely different view of good and evil. Thank you, Anais.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-56086097090997336852009-10-01T19:15:18.371-04:002009-10-01T19:15:18.371-04:00@Mark
thanks.
@David
I really didn't thought a...@Mark<br />thanks.<br />@David<br />I really didn't thought about it, not in these terms, so thank you for your interpretation.<br />@briarcat<br />"you" is any person who forgot that if you see in dark red and white the devil can sneak in because he is not dark-red , neither is an angel white - so no particular reference in mind.<br />@Cynthia<br />thanksAnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-78868734026140333312009-10-01T18:22:55.617-04:002009-10-01T18:22:55.617-04:00Quite thought-provoking...well done!Quite thought-provoking...well done!Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-4835728878612218072009-10-01T16:46:40.617-04:002009-10-01T16:46:40.617-04:00I like the devil as being only a standard deviatio...I like the devil as being only a standard deviation from redemption. The blending of stats and theology's an interesting one. <br />Lost you after the forth stanza--get the feeling that "you" is more specific at the end, but don't get the reference.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-34523400663854886622009-10-01T16:12:02.661-04:002009-10-01T16:12:02.661-04:00I think using statistical terms as a religous meta...I think using statistical terms as a religous metaphor is both wonderfully original and effective as it's instantly objective and quantitative when so much of the religious is qualitative and infinite. This blends (no pun intended) well with your simultaneous use of color, which has similar advantages.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-64129613346762754112009-10-01T15:11:51.559-04:002009-10-01T15:11:51.559-04:00Sucked me right in, and left me thinking.
I rea...Sucked me right in, and left me thinking. <br /><br />I really like this, the idea, the construction, the pacing...Markhttp://radio-nowhere.org/nb/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-45628982120572901022009-10-01T14:51:48.235-04:002009-10-01T14:51:48.235-04:00@Anthony
thank you...
@Paul O.
well stats and salv...@Anthony<br />thank you...<br />@Paul O.<br />well stats and salvation do have one thing in common- they do assume that a population is diverse. <br />@Francis<br />What I like about the statistical concepts I used is that they are very intuitive: deviation from the norm is good enough for me in its common use...Anahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-46954320545040034422009-10-01T14:01:43.474-04:002009-10-01T14:01:43.474-04:00I re-read this a couple times after seeing the &qu...I re-read this a couple times after seeing the "immigration" label, and it added an extra dimension I hadn't considered at first reading. There is a lot of depth here. I like the emphasis on shading, and the statistical references.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-35826694523392089272009-10-01T13:32:03.895-04:002009-10-01T13:32:03.895-04:00The statistical science of salvation.
Wow!
Very ...The statistical science of salvation.<br /><br />Wow!<br /><br />Very nice integration of image and and scientific paradigm.<br />_____<br /><br />Paul Oakley<br />Blogging his ReadWritePoem poems at <br /><a href="http://innerlight-radiantlife.blogspot.com/search/label/Read%20Write%20Poem" rel="nofollow"><i>Inner Light, Radiant Life</i></a>Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-74424689012795852632009-10-01T13:24:51.930-04:002009-10-01T13:24:51.930-04:00The depth in this is intriguing and so very subtle...The depth in this is intriguing and so very subtle.<br />Marvellous.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-85535810734647931942009-10-01T11:20:09.430-04:002009-10-01T11:20:09.430-04:00Paul,
Hmm,I think you may see something in it I d...Paul,<br /><br />Hmm,I think you may see something in it I do not see or intended...meaning, maybe, just maybe it is really a keeper.Many thanks...Anahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-2165383999845502282009-10-01T00:41:46.834-04:002009-10-01T00:41:46.834-04:00That's a very cool poem with an idea more subt...That's a very cool poem with an idea more subtle than it appears at first. I like the way it sounds too a little rhyme and rhythm carries the reader through the poem.Paulhttp://gingatao.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-68776342888617384962009-09-30T14:38:12.250-04:002009-09-30T14:38:12.250-04:00@Julie,
thank you.So the first two stanzas might ...@Julie,<br /><br />thank you.So the first two stanzas might be a keeper. <br />I am afraid that I did not intend to write a poem with a moral, but I guess I couldn't help it- I shall start writing contemporary fables.Anahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2659753466351932668.post-44096765571593432582009-09-30T12:02:01.073-04:002009-09-30T12:02:01.073-04:00Very powerful! I love the sound you have created ...Very powerful! I love the sound you have created in the lines. And, of course, the poem gives me much to think about. The first two stanzas pull me right in. It's a great prompt, too.Juliehttp://www.juliebuff.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com