You decided to enter my life
with your lies and guts
bullying others as usual.
And now all I wish
is to forget your face
or how I ever met you
but you took over the air
so I have to breath you.
I have to obsess over you
and your lie.
So I can make you not happen
and get my freedom, back.
14 comments:
I really like "so I can make you not happen." Great line.
All I could think was how dark and depressing obsession is. And dangerous. Thanks for the read.
Sounds like a normal relationship...
The embrace which becomes an antithesis, a self-smothering: saying Yes too much becomes the obsessional drown.
Susan,
yes obsession is dangerous -it is time consuming. And time is something I am always running short lately.
Simona,
Depending on how you define normal
Twitches,
Thank you. I hope it works or I foresee 4 dark years…
Brendan,
wow, your comment sounds better than my poem.
Obsession Passion very similiar don't you think? I also like the last line and the descriptions of many real life bullies.
It was just a sour observation from me. :) I was just sarcastic. lol
But I'm afraid this is the case very often.
Simona,
yes, it might be the case. How often... I really do not want to think about occurrences right now.
lela b,
thank you. Obsession Passion –yes, a very thin line. However in this case passion is out of the question. Yes, many bullies and pit bull(ies), with or with out lipstick.
I really liked the last two lines. :)
It's almost a contradiction in terms, obsessing over someone to forget him, but that's what makes this poem work.
Oh, I've so been here. You've written the feelings perfectly,
& the truth is at first I enjoyed
the obsession...however not for
long. Thank you for writing this.
thanks, I am glad you liked it...
Kimberly,
yes, I think the last line was the best...
Christine,
When somebody keeps on bullying you and does not let go, I guess you have to dedicate a little more time to made him/her go away...
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