Wednesday, December 31, 2008

Title collage (Readwritepoem#59)

This is not a poem.
This is a map of you:
loving, warm and gentle;
burned hips waiting
to be cooled by my wetness.



It is a map of you
(on a hot blueberry afternoon)
splash of colors on dirty scraps of paper
"What are the letters made of?"
"Bones against clay"


This was a map of you
loving, warm and gentle,
on wet sand.
A few memory lines got erased by the tide.
Insoluble, essential minerals are what remain


This is an answer to this prompt.

I used the titles provided by : a~lotus, linda, gautami, deb, eden and sister AE ...

Don't know about the poem -but I did have fun...






14 comments:

Paul said...

The poem is wonderful, beautifully made with subtle precision and depth. "lines erased by tide".

Annamari said...

Thanks Paul,

...probably because half ain't mine :)

angie said...

You wove a beautiful moment.

rob kistner said...

well crafted -- warm and gentle...

Sweet Talking Guy.. said...

I like the map of you reference and refrain. Nicely put together!

Annamari said...

Angie:thanks
rob I only take half of the credit
andy I am trying my hand now on forms such as ballade and villanelle( not always successful, but thanks for noticing the refrain)

gautami tripathy said...

Woven very well. Captured a great moment..

Have a great new creative year 2009!

packets of love

Annamari said...

thanks, Gautami...

have a great year too!

Crafty Green Poet said...

this is lovely, I like the style uyou've used

artpredator said...

very beautiful...love the questions and answers

Annamari said...

Juliet,
Thanks,
I really do not know about the style...I wanted to write a villanelle , but this is what came out (not a vilannelle)
Gwen
again, only half is mine...thanks...

trezirea2007 said...

felicitari pentru poem... e foarte postmodern...

Annamari said...

t2007

multam. Post6modern, daca zici tu...

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