Thursday, October 27, 2011

Happines with you was a cry of despair

Panic within
your cubicled heart
just naked white
walls naked skin
I hurl curse scream 
obscured cubicle walls
pushed in

 Excerpt from the 3:15 Experiment  (August 21 )


Madeleine Begun Kane said...

I can feel the panic. Good job!

Shauna said...

The heart naked & vulnerable yet
still perhaps unobtainable?

Ana said...

Vulnerable,yes. Vulnerable people are known to build walls around their hearts and don't let anybody close. Thank you for your visit & comments Shauna.