Nicole, after you mentioned that you see a dark side in it , I thought:yes, since I left him under the sea in a block of ice ;).thanks. Carolee, thank you...i liked it because blue and ice could mean they come from a place of peace and silence, but blue is also about the blues... Angie, many, many thanks . I wrote it all around the penguin sea, i thought this is worth a poem... Deb, I am glad you enjoyed reading it becaus I enjoyed writing it...
What a beautiful poem! I love the contrasts of black and white, cold and hot (love). The frozen memories. I also love the delicate lines. This is spectacular!
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That is a beautiful visual poem. Many lovely touches, close and tightly made. There's an innocence to it too that gives it great charm.
very visual, very chilly too!
A cold image, but your words warm it up.
Paul,
many thanks.
Juliet,
chilly, I know :) -it is snowing again :(
Anthony,
something gotta warm up :).Thank you.
This strikes me as lovely, yet with a hint of darkness.
i like "blue memories"!
Beautiful!
and I adore "the penguin sea!"
Delightful, surprising in simple poignancy.
Nicole,
after you mentioned that you see a dark side in it , I thought:yes, since I left him under the sea in a block of ice ;).thanks.
Carolee,
thank you...i liked it because blue and ice could mean they come from a place of peace and silence, but blue is also about the blues...
Angie,
many, many thanks . I wrote it all around the penguin sea, i thought this is worth a poem...
Deb,
I am glad you enjoyed reading it becaus I enjoyed writing it...
I also like "the penguin sea". Very evocative.
thank you, James.
Off-topic: ti-am trimis o leapsa :) !
What a beautiful poem! I love the contrasts of black and white, cold and hot (love). The frozen memories. I also love the delicate lines. This is spectacular!
Julie,
thank you.. i hadn't thought about it but the cold images might be about the absent love, the absent warmth...
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